In the future, we may have to live on other planets

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In the future, we may have to live on other planets. For this reason, some people think it is best to spend money on researching other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Scientists predict that the unprecedented population growth and pollution will harm the world so that many nations will find life on other planets, such as Mars and the Moon, in the future...

Undoubtedly, scientists seek another planet to live on for many reasons. The prominent point is that it increases the value of pollution...

Admittedly, many people believe that another significant cause is the exponential pace of population...

To conclude, there are no doubt tremendous problems people face on earth. Other stars and planets, such as Mars, possibly will be our second home for the human future...
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