Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops
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Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative trend?
Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative trend?
Answer 1
People love large malls and big markets, and the trend has a detrimental impact on local shops. I think significant discounts and a wide range of products let people visit big stores rather than the nearest shops...
To begin with, consumers have an opportunity to get a broader range of products at discounted prices at supermarkets only...
Secondly, access to Multiplex and food outlets simultaneously poured a proxy for this modern trend...
On a practical note, this trend created numerous job opportunities in most of the city, eventually addressing the severe concern of unemployment...
Although this trend proves to be a grave danger for local dealers, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages...
To begin with, consumers have an opportunity to get a broader range of products at discounted prices at supermarkets only...
Secondly, access to Multiplex and food outlets simultaneously poured a proxy for this modern trend...
On a practical note, this trend created numerous job opportunities in most of the city, eventually addressing the severe concern of unemployment...
Although this trend proves to be a grave danger for local dealers, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages...
Band: 8
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IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(13), this(8), trend(7), for(7), shopping(4), products(4), people(3); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(13), this(8), trend(7), for(7), shopping(4), products(4), people(3); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Answer 2
With the introduction of giant supermarkets throughout all major cities worldwide, it is becoming an increasingly popular trend to shop all our daily needs from them, instead of our local shop...
The establishment of these supermarkets has shown an adverse effect on the small shops that have lost most of their customers gradually...
Supermarkets have many advantages as they are a one-stop solution to one's needs. They have a massive list of items stacked up, which makes two ends meet...
On the downside, goods from supermarkets are overpriced as compared to the ones from local shops, as they include rental expenses/transport charges/storage charges, etc...
In this era, where time is money, supermarkets make life more comfortable and faster. However, there seems to be a need for equal support/importance to be given to local shops, which can help local farmers and business people to grow and flourish, contributing to a regional economic boost...
The establishment of these supermarkets has shown an adverse effect on the small shops that have lost most of their customers gradually...
Supermarkets have many advantages as they are a one-stop solution to one's needs. They have a massive list of items stacked up, which makes two ends meet...
On the downside, goods from supermarkets are overpriced as compared to the ones from local shops, as they include rental expenses/transport charges/storage charges, etc...
In this era, where time is money, supermarkets make life more comfortable and faster. However, there seems to be a need for equal support/importance to be given to local shops, which can help local farmers and business people to grow and flourish, contributing to a regional economic boost...
Band: 7
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Answer 3
Nowadays, cities have changed differently; you can see tall buildings and large shops in big cities...
To begin, we should consider that our lives have changed and we spend more time working than before, and therefore, we don't have enough time for shopping...
Furthermore, when you go to big shops, you can find different marks of the goods and compare their costs and features...
Although emerging big malls in our cities have had many advantages, we can not buy everything from these malls...
In conclusion, going to large supermarkets is a good trend in people's lives, but it may hurt small supermarkets distributed all over cities, and we absolutely need them...
To begin, we should consider that our lives have changed and we spend more time working than before, and therefore, we don't have enough time for shopping...
Furthermore, when you go to big shops, you can find different marks of the goods and compare their costs and features...
Although emerging big malls in our cities have had many advantages, we can not buy everything from these malls...
In conclusion, going to large supermarkets is a good trend in people's lives, but it may hurt small supermarkets distributed all over cities, and we absolutely need them...
Band: 6.5
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Answer 4
In the present scenario, the supermarket has gained more popularity in the last two decades, and most people buy things from big marts rather than small shops...
There are tremendous advantages to buying household things from the big market. First and foremost, it saves individuals time and money...
Apart from that, a big market is a convenient shopping method for people of every age. They can obtain various goods from there, and small shops can't collect a large variety...
On the other hand, small shops are the backbone of every country's economy. It does not only employ a myriad of people but also contributes to a great portion of the country's economy...
To conclude, there is no doubt supermarkets have eased the lives of individuals in numerous ways, but we do not deny the drawbacks of big malls...
There are tremendous advantages to buying household things from the big market. First and foremost, it saves individuals time and money...
Apart from that, a big market is a convenient shopping method for people of every age. They can obtain various goods from there, and small shops can't collect a large variety...
On the other hand, small shops are the backbone of every country's economy. It does not only employ a myriad of people but also contributes to a great portion of the country's economy...
To conclude, there is no doubt supermarkets have eased the lives of individuals in numerous ways, but we do not deny the drawbacks of big malls...
Band: 6.5
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Answer 5
The emerging concept of supermarkets is spreading wildly worldwide, affecting some traditional shops in a particular area...
Though people are adopting this shopping trend, it has a dreadful impact on local businesses. Some non-native supermarkets take away the country's money, while local sellers barely survive...
Considering the cultural aspect, shopping malls are a real threat to traditional markets. For example, historically and culturally rich countries, India's traditional markets are struggling to survive...
All in all, it can be said that, though supermarkets negatively impact local shops, the economy, and culture, they have remarkable benefits, too...
Though people are adopting this shopping trend, it has a dreadful impact on local businesses. Some non-native supermarkets take away the country's money, while local sellers barely survive...
Considering the cultural aspect, shopping malls are a real threat to traditional markets. For example, historically and culturally rich countries, India's traditional markets are struggling to survive...
All in all, it can be said that, though supermarkets negatively impact local shops, the economy, and culture, they have remarkable benefits, too...
Band: 6
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Answer 6
In the current scenario, a country's economic growth is directly linked to business modifications...
To begin with, the significant problem is that small-scale shopkeepers face loss in their business...
Umpteen positive impacts can be listed for buying from supermarkets. One of them is less effort due to a one-stop purchase where we can buy all the products required by any family member...
Despite the positives, we cannot discard the adverse developments. Buying unwanted items is the primary setback...
To recapitulate, this essay discussed why shopping in supermarkets is a downside for local shops and explained the benefits and drawbacks of this advancement...
To begin with, the significant problem is that small-scale shopkeepers face loss in their business...
Umpteen positive impacts can be listed for buying from supermarkets. One of them is less effort due to a one-stop purchase where we can buy all the products required by any family member...
Despite the positives, we cannot discard the adverse developments. Buying unwanted items is the primary setback...
To recapitulate, this essay discussed why shopping in supermarkets is a downside for local shops and explained the benefits and drawbacks of this advancement...
Band: 6
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Answer 7
Recently, shopping habits have been very different than before. Most people currently shop in supermarkets instead of buying their needs in the local shop as they used to do...
Nowadays, people indeed prefer buying their products in the supermarket. Even though they can easily find their needs in the local shops nearby, this new attitude is due to the fact that people find more than they need in a supermarket, which can help them sometimes to remember to buy some products that they forget, thanks to the supermarket organization and design...
Moreover, this development has a positive and negative impact on the customers and the society's culture and economy in general...
In conclusion, local shops have lost their place in society because of the development and the change in shopping attitudes resulting from the spread of supermarkets in our community...
Nowadays, people indeed prefer buying their products in the supermarket. Even though they can easily find their needs in the local shops nearby, this new attitude is due to the fact that people find more than they need in a supermarket, which can help them sometimes to remember to buy some products that they forget, thanks to the supermarket organization and design...
Moreover, this development has a positive and negative impact on the customers and the society's culture and economy in general...
In conclusion, local shops have lost their place in society because of the development and the change in shopping attitudes resulting from the spread of supermarkets in our community...
Band: 5.5
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Answer 8
In recent years, shopping in supermarkets has been preferred over local stores. While there are many benefits to shopping in supermarkets, there are also some drawbacks to consider...
In the past 25 years, shopping in supermarkets has increased substantially compared to purchasing from local shops...
Furthermore, the quality of products can be trusted as they can be returned quickly without much hassle...
This can lead to several concerns for local shop owners. If this trend continues, local shops might run into losses and lose out on their loyal customers...
In my opinion, the development of supermarkets is a boon to the customer as they not only enjoy the quality of products but also the ease of their availability...
In the past 25 years, shopping in supermarkets has increased substantially compared to purchasing from local shops...
Furthermore, the quality of products can be trusted as they can be returned quickly without much hassle...
This can lead to several concerns for local shop owners. If this trend continues, local shops might run into losses and lose out on their loyal customers...
In my opinion, the development of supermarkets is a boon to the customer as they not only enjoy the quality of products but also the ease of their availability...
Band: 5.5
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