What discovery in the last 100 years has benefited most people in your country

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What discovery in the last 100 years has benefited most people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Answer 1
Numerous discoveries and advancements have revolutionized human society in the past century. In my view, one breakthrough stands out as particularly impactful in benefiting the most people: the development of antibiotics...

The discovery of antibiotics, such as penicillin by Alexander Fleming in 1928, marked a pivotal moment in medical history...

The widespread availability and use of antibiotics have led to significant improvements in life expectancy and quality of life...

Beyond their direct impact on health, antibiotics have also facilitated advancements in other areas of medicine and technology...

In conclusion, the discovery of antibiotics is one of the most consequential developments of the last century...
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