Do you agree or disagree with the following statement

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Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they aren't in health; their health status will influence how they behave.
Answer 1
When individuals are not in good health, their behavior often undergoes significant changes as a result of physical discomfort, emotional distress, and cognitive impairment...

One reason why people behave differently when they are not in good health is the impact of physical symptoms and discomfort on mood and emotional well-being...

Moreover, illness or injury can exacerbate existing mental health issues or trigger new emotional challenges such as anxiety or depression...

Additionally, cognitive impairment or altered mental state resulting from illness or injury can affect decision-making, judgment, and impulse control, leading to changes in behavior that may seem out of character...

Furthermore, the social context and support system surrounding individuals can also influence their behavior when they are not in good health...

In conclusion, people behave differently when they are not in good health due to a combination of physical, emotional, cognitive, and social factors...
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Link Words: 28 (including link phrase: 5)
Sentences: Number: 12; Average Length: 188 characters; Words/Sentence: 27
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IELTS Essay Format:
-You had better rewrite the essay to 4 or 5 paragraphs.